Evidence of a nautical legacy seems to pop up every time you turn around. That strand of blue-and-white rope gives you an idea of the size and heft of each link.
yes, you know what they say of bread and roses (well, that gilt-edged smoked gouda’s still in the refrigerator, a rare indulgence from last week’s after-inquest) and legitimate French bread (the stuff in this town only is regular dough inside; what a delight to know immediately with the first knife stroke that THIS was the genuine crusty article) (dinner tonight onion soup with gobs of cheese toasted under the broiler, leafy salad, and baguette slices heaped with Vermont butter. if she’d only been with me) Parbleu, this is weird!
Consider each chapter a movie – beginning, middle, and end – conflict and some resolution. Boy meets girl etc.
My characters don’t lie … it’s one of my defects.
Any time it sounds like writing, cut!
Always go for RIGHT BRAIN revisions
Each book is unique, special, fragile in its own way. Honor it.
Talk to your readers. Like in a smoky bar.
Rereading an old favorite, only to realize how much my own standards have risen.
Certainly, there is room for a range of Midwestern writing as well – and for recognition of the manifold subtleties among the smaller localities within that country. It ain’t as bland as you’d think.
“Riotous complexity moving swiftly within a basic unity” (from How the Irish Saved Civilization) … not a bad formula for creativity, is it?
What was I really hoping to accomplish, back when there were only 500 new novels a week?