I’ve mentioned the deep revisions What’s Left underwent on its way to its current incarnation. Most of the work was done entirely on the computer, but a few rounds on paper helped, too. Here’s a sample from maybe Round Nine.
What serious revisions look like
Jnana's Red Barn 
The revision part of the process is the bane of my existence. I’ve also found that it’s possible to never stop editing. Ever. Anyway, thanks for sharing this!
Yeah, that endless revision can be a trap. Still, I do appreciate the work when it makes the meaning clearer and the structure stronger.